Average Scores

During the showcase the class were told to rate our film out of 10 on editing, sound, camerawork, control of narrative, characters and whether or not they would watch it all. The average scores were as followed:

Editing: 7.1/10
Sound: 6.7/10
Camerawork: 7.4/10
Control of narrative: 7.2/10
Characters: 8/10
Would you watch it all?: 7.4/10

Feedback from Miss...

Miss Thrasher gave us alot of compliments for our film and also gave us things to fix. Below is the sheet she filled in and the comments that she made

The Showcase.

As we were the first to complete our film, or at least be near to completing it we had a "show case" whereby we showed the class our film and they critiqued it. On the whole it went well, but we realised our credits still needed a lot of work and that the sound needed to be edited as some of it was inaudible. The main issue that was raised was the sound not being as good as it could be. The film was good, but not great yet.

Our most helpful Feedback

Although nearly all of the feedback from our class was helpful, we decided to post our best comments that gave the most constructive criticism. Below shows their comments:

Trouble with the credits

We found it quite difficult to put the credits in and still keep it looking like an authentic and well made film and not rushed. We tried numerous ways but we couldn't agree on anything. Above is one way we tried to do our credits.

Editing and the first "finished" film

Below is our first draft of the film completed with sound.

Editing Process Continued

Having watched through our product we noted that several shots needed to be cut to make the sequences flow better. Just by shortening the shots slightly we took nearly a minute off of our opening sequence.