Small but needed changes..

We were all relatively happy with how things were going but after going through it very closely and analysing it we decided that there were some small cuts which needed to be made. We literally took no more than 2 seconds off of a few shots but the difference it made was unbelieveable. It made the film run so much smoother.

More credit editing!

We still were not satisfied with the credits. Above is another example of the way we tried to include credits.

Average Scores

During the showcase the class were told to rate our film out of 10 on editing, sound, camerawork, control of narrative, characters and whether or not they would watch it all. The average scores were as followed:

Editing: 7.1/10
Sound: 6.7/10
Camerawork: 7.4/10
Control of narrative: 7.2/10
Characters: 8/10
Would you watch it all?: 7.4/10

Feedback from Miss...

Miss Thrasher gave us alot of compliments for our film and also gave us things to fix. Below is the sheet she filled in and the comments that she made

The Showcase.

As we were the first to complete our film, or at least be near to completing it we had a "show case" whereby we showed the class our film and they critiqued it. On the whole it went well, but we realised our credits still needed a lot of work and that the sound needed to be edited as some of it was inaudible. The main issue that was raised was the sound not being as good as it could be. The film was good, but not great yet.

Our most helpful Feedback

Although nearly all of the feedback from our class was helpful, we decided to post our best comments that gave the most constructive criticism. Below shows their comments: